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Post by Guest Sat May 23, 2009 1:02 pm

A good friend sent me this poem in the email.
I was surprised when he told me that he wrote it himself, specifically for me.
Anyway thought you all might like it too.



Hollow man,
Hollow man,
Feels so alone.


Hollow man,
Hollow man,
Feels out of the zone.


Hollow man,
Hollow man,
Wants to moan.


'Cause teardrop aisles
In their big piles
Drags him down
For miles.


Make him scream
Hear the queens
Bellar through their trumpets.


Make him scream,
So serene,
Birds, want to preen.


Shed their feathers,
Shed their fight
Their miserable, past lives.


Hollow man,
Hollow man,
Do not scream


Hollow man,
Hollow man,
Please, just sing.

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Post by Guest Sun May 24, 2009 1:00 am

what a lovely poem. what did you think when you got it?

I don't have anyone to write me a poem, your very lucky!!

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Post by greasemonkey Sun May 24, 2009 3:55 am

mmmmm
Jaffa,

you should speak to my partner,
She understands the need for the artist
to express themselves,(she playsnsings with Guitar)
and in doing so
find Life in re-unting
as well as revealling Ones true nature!
oneness.

Only by Being-Hollow can one see this is true.

In studying zen
hollowing like a bamboo
the Air sings thro the flute.
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Post by Guest Sun May 24, 2009 2:00 pm

That is awesome Jaffa..... a gr8 friend you have. flower

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