My night in the mental hospital..

I'm writing this down..So i WILL NOT forget how much I didn't enjoy it!

At 9.30pm she did something bad,
she felt so stupid but she was sad,
A life for her,
she did not see,
Hopefully people would let her be.

A slight hint on the net,
set off a friend,
to get her the help,
and put her on the mend.

The boyfriend was scared,
and so was she,
she coudn't believe,
nor could he.

But he was strong,
and did not rest,
She wants you to know,
that you're the BEST.

She set off on the ambulance,
It was all a nightmare,
the scary thought was too much to bare.

Her heart beat was fast,
but she felt fine,
They monitored her,
but she knew she crossed the line.

Arrived at A and E,
filled out a sheet,
her boyfriend there said she would be sweet.

She talked to someone,
It was agreed,
that she should go,
and the lady did lead.

At 3.30am she went to the place,
The mental one,
She could not go home,
what's done is done.

She walked through the doors with her breath held tight,
almost motionless, she did not fight.
A very warm welcome she did receive,
But mind you, she wanted to leave.

The room was bare,
her things,
that's it.
She was so scared,
This didn't fit.

All by herself,
no one around
but she hear a scary sound.
Well more than one,
more than two, three in fact,
So she ended up making a pact.

That she would be safe,
and this is true,
She doesn't want to go cukoo.
So the next morning,
her mum was told,
that she was there,
Her mum was scared and horrified,
but that's only fair.

She cried and cried,
for at least half an hour,
She was in the room,
and she did cower.

Her mum came down,
her boyfriend and his dad as well,
seriously,
she needed a pal.

After a talk with the doctor,
A decision may lay,
That she could go home,
The exact same day.

She was thankful and relieved,
not another sleep there,
she may not be able,
to handle the fear.

At home home she is now,
Sleep will come soon,
She's terrified of this nightmare,
She's not a loon.

Tomorrow she must go back,
to get discharged she hopes,
but for now,
she slightly mopes.

She will try her best,
to get herself well,
with support and help,
She will hit the bell,

The bell of hope,
That life will be great,
She will never again,
Turn to self hate.

that is such a great poem Qwerky, good on you!

Verygood, i like the way u have layed it out, u should keep writing.

thank you

Have a great nite

I got discharged today..yay

yay!

Yeah, nothing has changed.... *sigh*

but how long have you been on the meds?

has it been 3 weeks? From what I have read they take about that long to kick in.

I've stopped taking them

why

did they say to stop