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Another poem titled "Prey"

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Post by Angel Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:20 am

Prey

On a park bench
Sitting amongst my pain
Each agonizing breath
Blames your hands, your touch
Your perverted behavior

Tainted blood runs through my veins
Venom from a snake
With no remorse
Slithering sinfully into my soul
Cursing my existence

You said that it was fine
I was the one to warm you up
Heating your cold blood
As you felt me with your scaly body
Making me shiver with disgust
You make me sick

You are a vile serpent
Consuming innocence
Like a power hungry demon
All the while blaming me
For not giving you enough

Sitting here alone
I think of a time
When I had a warm happy heart
And I mourn the loss
Numbly rubbing my hands
As the cold wind chills my bones

Observing passers by
Chatting happily
Holding their coffees
Heating their fingers
Scarves around their necks
Like legless elongated lizards

I wonder if they too
Had been bitten by a snake
Strangled by a secret
Wrapped around their throats
By an evil reptile like you

AMJ
2008

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Post by ZenMonsta Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:35 am

wow..........i am truly speechless *hugs* *hugs* and more *hugs*
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Post by Angel Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:56 am

Hugs back at you!! Thank you monsta.

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Post by Lonely Girl Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:04 am

thats awesome Angel. You have a way with words. Hugs!
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Post by Angel Tue Oct 21, 2008 6:44 am

Thank you Lonely Girl. Hugs to you as well!

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