Siren of the Desert
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Siren of the Desert
Siren of the Desert
Calling out to me
Queen of desolation
Spirit set me free...
I saw her standing in the desert
Starlight gleaming in her eyes
Sandstorm patterns swirling ’round her
Rhythmic magic hypnotise
Entrance my soul, I feel I’m flying
With her drifting by my side
An ocean of dust a mile below me
My head thrown back, my arms stretched wide
This girl beside me, is she real?
With ebony hair and emerald eyes
Skin so pale in shining moonlight
Whatever could lie beneath that guise?
Nocturne princess, dream incarnate
Floating over rippling dunes
Voice as sweet as airless whisper
Incantations making tunes
I look at her and ponder quietly
As she reaches out her hand
Should I take it, should I follow
Into her forgotten land?
Gently she caresses me
Her touch soothing away my pains
Then I realise who she is,
This ruler of the Barren Plains;
In this world of lifeless nothing
There’s this figure of perfection
Then I realise it’s just me here,
The Siren is my own reflection
As I gasp in wonderment
Truth dawns upon me in that breath
I am not just merely sleeping
She is the angel of my death
I need not dread that final passing
My time will come, my life will cease
For I now know what lies beyond that
This is my heaven where I am at peace...
Now forever I am resting
With the Siren at my side
Nothing to hurt me, nothing to fear
No more troubles from which to hide
The place I was will mourn this loss
My mortal coil now offshaken
This dark paradise falls before me
From which I shall not be forsaken
Now I feel I have come home
Living alone amongst the sands
I am the Siren of the Desert
And all before me: All my lands.
Calling out to me
Queen of desolation
Spirit set me free...
I saw her standing in the desert
Starlight gleaming in her eyes
Sandstorm patterns swirling ’round her
Rhythmic magic hypnotise
Entrance my soul, I feel I’m flying
With her drifting by my side
An ocean of dust a mile below me
My head thrown back, my arms stretched wide
This girl beside me, is she real?
With ebony hair and emerald eyes
Skin so pale in shining moonlight
Whatever could lie beneath that guise?
Nocturne princess, dream incarnate
Floating over rippling dunes
Voice as sweet as airless whisper
Incantations making tunes
I look at her and ponder quietly
As she reaches out her hand
Should I take it, should I follow
Into her forgotten land?
Gently she caresses me
Her touch soothing away my pains
Then I realise who she is,
This ruler of the Barren Plains;
In this world of lifeless nothing
There’s this figure of perfection
Then I realise it’s just me here,
The Siren is my own reflection
As I gasp in wonderment
Truth dawns upon me in that breath
I am not just merely sleeping
She is the angel of my death
I need not dread that final passing
My time will come, my life will cease
For I now know what lies beyond that
This is my heaven where I am at peace...
Now forever I am resting
With the Siren at my side
Nothing to hurt me, nothing to fear
No more troubles from which to hide
The place I was will mourn this loss
My mortal coil now offshaken
This dark paradise falls before me
From which I shall not be forsaken
Now I feel I have come home
Living alone amongst the sands
I am the Siren of the Desert
And all before me: All my lands.
Daecon- Number of posts : 4
Location : Wellington
Registration date : 2009-01-12
Re: Siren of the Desert
MMmmm
very interesting and well written.
I enjoyed that journeying.
beautiful
very interesting and well written.
I enjoyed that journeying.
beautiful
greasemonkey- Number of posts : 940
Location : -
Registration date : 2008-09-15
Re: Siren of the Desert
daecon...this piece of writting has absolutely blown me away...I have been back in and reread it quite a few times...and every time I read it I want to say something...but just cant find the words!!!...so instead I will just say THANK YOU for sharing this
britelite- Number of posts : 228
Age : 55
Location : South Waikato
Registration date : 2008-08-17
Re: Siren of the Desert
Powerful
You have a marvellous way with words. I loved the twist. Beautiful imagery.
You have a marvellous way with words. I loved the twist. Beautiful imagery.
Guerrilla Roach- Number of posts : 169
Age : 48
Location : Christchurch
Registration date : 2008-12-07
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