Others and me
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Others and me
A label fell upon my head
It came from a man professionally said
He raised his head from notes he writ
The gabble fell the sentence fit
I bounced through youth scarcely aware
People told barely contained their fear
Awkward and different and found wholly deficient
As strangers began to stare
But I could not keep this conviction
It fits only symptoms
What of me lost forgotten inside
The strength of forgiveness
Understood the headiness
I could no longer run and hide
So I approached my label
To understand its fable
I came to terms with symptoms I dread
It can be only me
That is happy and free
I keep myself whole and well fed
It came from a man professionally said
He raised his head from notes he writ
The gabble fell the sentence fit
I bounced through youth scarcely aware
People told barely contained their fear
Awkward and different and found wholly deficient
As strangers began to stare
But I could not keep this conviction
It fits only symptoms
What of me lost forgotten inside
The strength of forgiveness
Understood the headiness
I could no longer run and hide
So I approached my label
To understand its fable
I came to terms with symptoms I dread
It can be only me
That is happy and free
I keep myself whole and well fed
Last edited by Guerrilla Roach on Wed May 13, 2009 1:39 am; edited 1 time in total
Guerrilla Roach- Number of posts : 169
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Re: Others and me
oo i like this one so well said thankyou
attica- Number of posts : 55
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Re: Others and me
Cool cheers for your feeback
Guerrilla Roach- Number of posts : 169
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Re: Others and me
mmm
reads well too!
are you a musically inclined person?
poetry?
gm
reads well too!
are you a musically inclined person?
poetry?
gm
greasemonkey- Number of posts : 940
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Re: Others and me
Yeah, I sing in a band, play intsruments and write.
Guerrilla Roach- Number of posts : 169
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Re: Others and me
Do you put your words to music or others? Its just I know ppl who r musical but don't like to use their own words, or rarely do.
attica- Number of posts : 55
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Re: Others and me
I put my words to my music and the music of others too. It's a hugely valuable way to express myself as well as vent.
Guerrilla Roach- Number of posts : 169
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Re: Others and me
Very cool G'Roach. Keep the words coming. I don't do words well myself but appreciate those who do
attica- Number of posts : 55
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Re: Others and me
Thanks
Guerrilla Roach- Number of posts : 169
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Re: Others and me
GR,
goodone.
My wife ahs just picked a book-up from the library about the How-toos of what you do.
I think she an I could both benefit from this area of life!
goodone.
My wife ahs just picked a book-up from the library about the How-toos of what you do.
I think she an I could both benefit from this area of life!
greasemonkey- Number of posts : 940
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Re: Others and me
I am a grain of sand
caught up in a wave
only to be laid upon the shore
I am a reed in the wind
no matter how the wind blows
I shift, but always anchored to the ground
I am a drop in the ocean and I am the ocean itself
the more I understand the drop
The more I understand the ocean
caught up in a wave
only to be laid upon the shore
I am a reed in the wind
no matter how the wind blows
I shift, but always anchored to the ground
I am a drop in the ocean and I am the ocean itself
the more I understand the drop
The more I understand the ocean
Guerrilla Roach- Number of posts : 169
Age : 48
Location : Christchurch
Registration date : 2008-12-07
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