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A poem I wrote

Post by peterpam on Sun Jul 05, 2009 5:34 am

Some time back, after seperating from my partner, feeling let down, used, angry and devastated to name a few emotions, lol, one way I found to heal was to write. Thankfully I am now in a better space, but today I found one of my poems, so before I incinerate it, I thought I might share.

When I awake with tears of sad
I wonder if I ever had
The love I thought I was to you
I lie alone my life astrew

My tears are for the one I loved
The man I thought I could have trust
My heart is broken with the pain
I know in time will mend again

I gave it up my soul to you
You take so much, you know you do
You told me me that I was your world
And then you crushed me with your words

You played your game, you drew me in
I never knew I couldn't win
I played it well, I gave my all
But now I think I was your fool

When your darkness comes
And your veil unfolds
I wonder what your future holds
I hope its kind, that you might see
The man that meant so much to me

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Re: A poem I wrote

Post by Guest on Sun Jul 05, 2009 5:36 am

well written - very impressive!

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Post by peterpam on Mon Jul 06, 2009 8:28 pm

Thanks mylife. Not sure about well written, it was just there in my head when I woke one morning, so I put it to paper.

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Post by Guest on Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:21 pm

it might have been in your head when you woke up one morning, but it is so awesome.

wish I had a gift like that

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Post by peterpam on Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:50 pm

Oh mylife, honestly!!! don't you know??. You need to look over your own writing again sweet, you are very talented. Very talented indeed madam.

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Post by Guest on Mon Jul 06, 2009 10:05 pm

Hey you used to write the Tui's ad's ay


hahahahahaha Laughing

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Post by peterpam on Tue Jul 07, 2009 6:27 am

hehe, yeah right.

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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:10 am

i can see you running away now with a crate, running.. running away....hehehehhehe

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Post by peterpam on Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:45 am

Oh I wish, but I dont think tui do Chardonnay do they???. Behave.

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Post by Guest on Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:55 am

hehehehehe

nah I couldn't behave sometimes, if I tried!

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Post by peterpam on Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:45 am

Good on you Mylife, I probably don't behave to often myself. Now that would be boring huh.

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Post by Guest on Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:35 pm

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