A poem I wrote
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A poem I wrote
Some time back, after seperating from my partner, feeling let down, used, angry and devastated to name a few emotions, lol, one way I found to heal was to write. Thankfully I am now in a better space, but today I found one of my poems, so before I incinerate it, I thought I might share.
When I awake with tears of sad
I wonder if I ever had
The love I thought I was to you
I lie alone my life astrew
My tears are for the one I loved
The man I thought I could have trust
My heart is broken with the pain
I know in time will mend again
I gave it up my soul to you
You take so much, you know you do
You told me me that I was your world
And then you crushed me with your words
You played your game, you drew me in
I never knew I couldn't win
I played it well, I gave my all
But now I think I was your fool
When your darkness comes
And your veil unfolds
I wonder what your future holds
I hope its kind, that you might see
The man that meant so much to me
When I awake with tears of sad
I wonder if I ever had
The love I thought I was to you
I lie alone my life astrew
My tears are for the one I loved
The man I thought I could have trust
My heart is broken with the pain
I know in time will mend again
I gave it up my soul to you
You take so much, you know you do
You told me me that I was your world
And then you crushed me with your words
You played your game, you drew me in
I never knew I couldn't win
I played it well, I gave my all
But now I think I was your fool
When your darkness comes
And your veil unfolds
I wonder what your future holds
I hope its kind, that you might see
The man that meant so much to me
peterpam- Number of posts : 653
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Re: A poem I wrote
Thanks mylife. Not sure about well written, it was just there in my head when I woke one morning, so I put it to paper.
peterpam- Number of posts : 653
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Re: A poem I wrote
it might have been in your head when you woke up one morning, but it is so awesome.
wish I had a gift like that
wish I had a gift like that
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Re: A poem I wrote
Oh mylife, honestly!!! don't you know??. You need to look over your own writing again sweet, you are very talented. Very talented indeed madam.
peterpam- Number of posts : 653
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Re: A poem I wrote
hehe, yeah right.
peterpam- Number of posts : 653
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Re: A poem I wrote
i can see you running away now with a crate, running.. running away....hehehehhehe
Guest- Guest
Re: A poem I wrote
Oh I wish, but I dont think tui do Chardonnay do they???. Behave.
peterpam- Number of posts : 653
Location : christchurch
Registration date : 2008-10-26
Re: A poem I wrote
Good on you Mylife, I probably don't behave to often myself. Now that would be boring huh.
peterpam- Number of posts : 653
Location : christchurch
Registration date : 2008-10-26
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