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Post by Will on Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:36 am

Darkness and Light

Into Darkness I feel i fall
Up to the light surface i try to call
Black suffocates all sight and sound
Light disappears like hallow ground

I feel
I touch
I taste
Nothing

Why does this happen
Where do we go
Am i choosing my life
Or following the flow

I feel
I touch
I taste
Nothing

Abyss deepens and void of all
I contune to fall
A light beneath me lifts i chill
A speckled and funny lil old pill

I feel
I touch
I taste
Again

From hallowed senses i return to the brink
My heart on the floor now on the brink
I call out loud and sound comes out
I look at the world "AT LAST" i shout

I feel
I touch
I taste
Everything

Lightness is coming
Through thick and thin
Happiness i think is welling
Deep from within

I feel
I touch
I taste
I am human again!



Maybe a side of me others might not have thought about from TradeMe - yes this is inside Male_Timaru's head!! lol
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Post by Will on Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:41 am

Another one from my ADHD recognition days!


"Feelings"

"Chitter Chatter
Spitter Spatter
Piss Moan
Grin Groan

Feelings collide
Avenues inside
Boiling Aquaducts
Frothing Temples

Energy Building
Chitter Chatter
Spitter Spatter
Too much inside

spaghetti junction
Wires alive
Information Racing
Thoughts Collide

Frustration
Anger
Solitude
Together

NOT AT ALL
Is the call

Been living in hell
Since i was born
Nothing at my side
Just a rusty thorn

With tools i collect
And resurrect
Bring back to life
My world or the knife

Live with it
End it
Decisions Decisions
Why oh why me

SET ME FREE"
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This on is Called "I AM ALIVE"

Post by Will on Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:52 am

Instruction is the key

Aims are your goals
Me is for inside

Again with the lectures
Live a lot not a little
Incubate and devop
Verify the message in this poem
Evaluate the true message


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Post by ebony_eleven on Wed Dec 16, 2009 3:46 am

wow those are really good. this is male_timaru??
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Post by Will on Wed Dec 16, 2009 5:29 am

yip

lol didn't think i was like this eh - a side no-one's seen on tm before
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Post by becks on Wed Dec 16, 2009 5:44 am

Hey Will your poems are really good. I like' Darkness and Light'. I know what you mean about Depression when you talk about falling in to darkness. For me Depression feels like falling into a black hole-it's sort of like an emotional time warp. Hope that makes sense? P.S I'm feeling old..'cos I know who Sylvia Plath was!! flower
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Post by Will on Wed Dec 16, 2009 5:52 am

Sylvia Plath rocks especially her most famous Poem DADDY - so do all the other poets of her era and genre - loved that stuff at school - was a real GLEE person at school (but cool cos i was playing and good at rugby too lol)

Other favourites are William Blake SONGS OF INNOCENCE and THE LAMB

Just remmbered a couple of others again that i had forgotten but found on internet STANZAS TO THE PO Lord Byron (or George Gordon as was his real name lol)

On a Dead Violet by (Percy Bysshe) Shelley
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Post by Will on Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:34 am

"SON SHINE"
Started today 19.29 finished 19.34 lol

"He is the best, the biggest catch
The juiciest cabbage in the patch.
The greenest apple and plushest grape
The finest descendant of man from ape.

He swaggers and sways and at night he prays
One day find a partner with no delays.
One fine dawn he woke with a yawn
To find his own heir was born.

In those eyes he looked deep
And saw how his parents sleep
Safe in the knowledge that one day soon
Their heir and son shall carry the spoon.

The knowledge he was fed is passed on
Down the line to their grandson.
And all shall weep as the first steps creep
Swagger and sway on that very leap.

Remember on and all who read
You were once small and a weed.
But given time you grew strong
So in your head sing your heartsong/"
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