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Post by kandco Sat Feb 07, 2009 10:16 pm

I feel safe writing this today, this is one of my better days Smile I have a friend who encouraged me into poetry... I'm not so good at it but it is a great way of letting a few feelings out. I'm off to escape in a book and enjoy a bit of that sunshine.

Brief Escape

Staring at my pc screen
Sitting here remain unseen
It’s hard to look, I’m full of shame
For surely I’m the one to blame
The loneliness I feel inside
It makes me want to run and hide
Locked inside this prison cell
Stuck inside this life of hell
Scared to walk outside the door
Don’t want to do this anymore
I’m thankful for my little dog
Who takes from the blinding fog
She helps me to walk out that door
Into the world I know no more
She smiles at me appreciatively
We find a park, I set her free
The stick we found, just one last throw
Then all too soon its time to go
And homeward bound we are once more
Back safe again, I lock the door
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Post by Easily Amused Sun Feb 08, 2009 12:47 am

Well written and a good poem, glad you have an outlet in poetry, art is another good form as well.

Hope tomorrow is a better day as well.
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Post by lowdown Sun Feb 08, 2009 2:19 am

Lovely kandco. My wee dog is my saviour too Laughing

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Post by daze7 Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:15 am

Hi kandco ..... yes, a dog is such a great friend and fun! I hope, in time, you'll expand your world and go further and further out into the big wide world. Sooooo much to see and explore .... BUT, I do understand your feeling safe behind your locked door. .... Daze
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Post by greasemonkey Sun Feb 08, 2009 6:08 am

one day you'l get spotted by a prospective lover kandko
and the door fall off its hinges...
from the repetitive opening and closing
ofcommings and goings,the little doggie run off its feet.
lol!
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Post by claire_sky Sun Feb 08, 2009 8:37 pm

Hi k and co - nice to meet you!

I enjoyed your poem! Something i can relate to aswell.

I walk my dog all the time but yet i would never walk around the street by myself!

Thanks for sharing it!

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Post by Guest Mon Feb 09, 2009 1:17 am

that really is an awesome poem - I enjoyed reading that too Smile

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