Haiku
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Haiku
Not art - but probably as creative as I will ever be. I wrote these about a year ago and thought I would share them here. (comments welcomed).
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My first attempt at Haikus. (5-7-5 syllable poems)
I'm going under
Apathy growing stronger
A downward spiral
Life is full of pain
Numbness stops the pain for now,
Pretend not to care.
Beautiful people
Green eyed monster grows within
Will I ever be?
People all around,
Can they feel my pain today?
Ignornace is bliss.
One special person,
Why can't I be good enough?
Noone will compare.
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My first attempt at Haikus. (5-7-5 syllable poems)
I'm going under
Apathy growing stronger
A downward spiral
Life is full of pain
Numbness stops the pain for now,
Pretend not to care.
Beautiful people
Green eyed monster grows within
Will I ever be?
People all around,
Can they feel my pain today?
Ignornace is bliss.
One special person,
Why can't I be good enough?
Noone will compare.
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Re: Haiku
mmm
I would like to learn haiku.
Japanese isnt it?
I believe it came out of the Zen tradition,
but im mostly wrong
when i guess.
I would like to learn haiku.
Japanese isnt it?
I believe it came out of the Zen tradition,
but im mostly wrong
when i guess.
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