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The circle of life

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Post by lifeshouldbegreat Tue Nov 04, 2008 6:21 am

OK I suck at writing,Im not a good poet but I have written something(dont know if it could pass as a poem)but first I'd like to explain it.On the 26th October our baby girl was born,the same day hubbys grandmother died,a friend of mine has just given birth to a sleeping baby,my mum and her sisters are stressed and fighting as my grandmother is in hospital and things arent looking good.My husband lost his grandmother but stayed strong for me,his mother,his brother,his sister,his grandfather and his cousins,he selflessly put everyone elses needs ahead of his own.Writing this whatever ya wanna call it has shown me that my life is actually pretty great right now

a newborn baby cries
a grandmother dies
a mother sheds a tear for the cry she'll never hear
4 daughters fight,their mothers end in sight
a husband staying strong for those who need him
I'll smile for today because I am alive,Im happy and healthy and my life is divine
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Post by Paddy Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:57 pm

flower

Bless You, Lifey.

Hey. This is your site. Please don't ever again apologise for not being a good writer, because you are. A good writer, uses words to say what they feel. There is a huge amount of feeling in the words you chose, my friend.

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Post by greasemonkey Mon Nov 10, 2008 9:51 am

Great,
you did well with your wisdom writing.
If we can remember ourselves
in the most difficult times...
we can explore these uncharted waters.

I must pull finger
and write something too.
thanks.
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