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Poem from my darkest days

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Post by ebony_eleven Tue Dec 15, 2009 10:10 pm

There are many ways to end ones life
Hanging, pills, bullet, knife
This ilness is in the head
Its evil ways will end you dead

You start off sad angry lonley
Depression comes round not so slowley
Isolation from the earth
living breathing, whats the worth

Thoughs of suffering, death and pain
Come as your joys are swiftly slain

The silver knife, so cold, so sharp
cleanly rips my skin apart

Thick red, my wrists run
Depression, you have won
I slowley slide to the floor
As my crimsom blood begins to pour

Surounded by a crimsom lake
I tell death, my life, he'l take
My head starts to fell a little light
This is the end of my long fight

Family, friends i am sorry
No longer will you need to worry

My body in the ground its lain
My soul, my spirit
free again


I know im not a poet, but yep, wrote that when i was 17, in some of my darkest days Sad
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Post by Will Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:42 am

Very Sylvia Plath and very good ebony - I like it - like it a lot
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Post by ebony_eleven Wed Dec 16, 2009 3:44 am

havent heard of sylvia plath, will google her Smile
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Post by Will Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:01 am

http://www.internal.org/list_poems.phtml?authorID=13

there you go - she's o for oarsome (probably into rowing sports!)
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Post by ebony_eleven Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:49 am

yes had a look at her, sum really good poems Smile
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