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s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:06 am
when I speak outwardly
it is a lessor rendition of what I feel,
as I say,'I love you'.
Between us,
as between all ppl that choose the heart as Their-Way
air becomes enlivened with presence.
In this same presence,
we truely know each-others heart,
choosing to attend the others needs with-out question.
it is a lessor rendition of what I feel,
as I say,'I love you'.
Between us,
as between all ppl that choose the heart as Their-Way
air becomes enlivened with presence.
In this same presence,
we truely know each-others heart,
choosing to attend the others needs with-out question.
Last edited by greasemonkey on Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:30 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:25 am
Having only words
Having strayed away too far
and broken lifes attachment,
a lover gasps-drowning
in the void between head n heart.
Only words of love can be trusted
as icycold waters slap at thighs below
an open invitation of darkness closed
you are My Love I know.
Words are best kept secrete
untill ones last-moment-apart
where they are most treasued
returning lovers to start.
Having strayed away too far
and broken lifes attachment,
a lover gasps-drowning
in the void between head n heart.
Only words of love can be trusted
as icycold waters slap at thighs below
an open invitation of darkness closed
you are My Love I know.
Words are best kept secrete
untill ones last-moment-apart
where they are most treasued
returning lovers to start.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:39 pm
Silence,
Having given-way to a scream
vanishing all dreams,
I find reality
in a Birds call.
Today a dove dived in from behind my right shoulder,
I heard a swishing of air through its feathered wings
When I am real the World is REAL.
Sounds of the birds call,
remind me
of Self.
Having given-way to a scream
vanishing all dreams,
I find reality
in a Birds call.
Today a dove dived in from behind my right shoulder,
I heard a swishing of air through its feathered wings
When I am real the World is REAL.
Sounds of the birds call,
remind me
of Self.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:15 pm
togetherness
How wonderfull, to have been loved all along
by your partner whom you could see
only patially, due to the darkness
within, shrouding every move
and every moment,
with self doubt.
How wonderfull
to know and to hold the same One
which you have learnt to grow-older with,
knowing that patience is the name of lifes game
and that it is certainly all been worth it as You head
towards the end of Lifes-Time of togetherness,
Smiling.
How wonderfull, to have been loved all along
by your partner whom you could see
only patially, due to the darkness
within, shrouding every move
and every moment,
with self doubt.
How wonderfull
to know and to hold the same One
which you have learnt to grow-older with,
knowing that patience is the name of lifes game
and that it is certainly all been worth it as You head
towards the end of Lifes-Time of togetherness,
Smiling.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Sun Feb 01, 2009 1:26 am
in silence
the birds words
at times,
in english say,
things to me
which cracks me up,
amidst silence.
the birds words
at times,
in english say,
things to me
which cracks me up,
amidst silence.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by Guerrilla Roach on Mon Feb 02, 2009 11:50 am
Beautiful 
Wisdom flows from such words with passionate abundance.
Wisdom flows from such words with passionate abundance.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Mon May 18, 2009 1:34 pm
thank you GR!
Iam back to re-considering exploring my writing lifestory.
Have lots of snipets recorded and the support of my partner.
In the past it came in dribbles and drabbles
yet I feel expectant(pregnant)
and await birthing
afresh.
Iam back to re-considering exploring my writing lifestory.
Have lots of snipets recorded and the support of my partner.
In the past it came in dribbles and drabbles
yet I feel expectant(pregnant)
and await birthing
afresh.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Tue May 19, 2009 9:05 pm
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Re: s i l e n c e
by mylife on Sat Jul 25, 2009 11:48 am
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_________________
this is mylife and I have control of it.
You have your life and only you control it
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:40 pm
wee, Ive been busy.
Not only started but driven onwards to write all sorts of experiences in Life,STARTING from 3 months old. Life in the pram.
The Tutor (English Master) says Im a natural.
Thats what I needed to hear!
Now all I have to do
is keep writing and use spellcheck
and learn abit of gramer.lol
Yahoo!
I'l leave my story in print for the children to understand their Father
after i pass on!Not too soon I hope!
Not only started but driven onwards to write all sorts of experiences in Life,STARTING from 3 months old. Life in the pram.
The Tutor (English Master) says Im a natural.
Thats what I needed to hear!
Now all I have to do
is keep writing and use spellcheck
and learn abit of gramer.lol
Yahoo!
I'l leave my story in print for the children to understand their Father
after i pass on!Not too soon I hope!
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Re: s i l e n c e
by britelite on Sat Aug 22, 2009 12:41 pm
hiya GM...sounds like you are suffering from the happys...that is a very very good thing!!!!!!!
as far as your Tutor saying you are a natural...well...all you had to do was ask any of us here...you have an amazing way with the written word...and a hell of a lot of wisdom which you weave through your posts
and about the spelling and grammar...all the published authors have proofreaders to worry about that...so all you have to do is become famous beyond here!!!!!...hahaha
all I ask is...please remember to write here once in a while and not just for your tutor.
as far as your Tutor saying you are a natural...well...all you had to do was ask any of us here...you have an amazing way with the written word...and a hell of a lot of wisdom which you weave through your posts
and about the spelling and grammar...all the published authors have proofreaders to worry about that...so all you have to do is become famous beyond here!!!!!...hahaha
all I ask is...please remember to write here once in a while and not just for your tutor.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by peterpam on Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:19 pm
Hi Gm, wow, what talent, but then we all knew you had both insight and an amazing way with words. You express yourself so, so well. Lovely to see you here, we have missed both your wisdom and your humour. Cleaver man indeed.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Sat Aug 22, 2009 7:37 pm
Britelite,
thank you heaps.
its heart warming to feel you care!
love
thank you heaps.
its heart warming to feel you care!
love
britelite wrote:hiya GM...sounds like you are suffering from the happys...that is a very very good thing!!!!!!!
as far as your Tutor saying you are a natural...well...all you had to do was ask any of us here...you have an amazing way with the written word...and a hell of a lot of wisdom which you weave through your posts
and about the spelling and grammar...all the published authors have proofreaders to worry about that...so all you have to do is become famous beyond here!!!!!...hahaha
all I ask is...please remember to write here once in a while and not just for your tutor.
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Re: s i l e n c e
by greasemonkey on Sat Aug 22, 2009 7:38 pm
howdy Pam.
Thank you too.
youre all so kind
I will be back.
love
Thank you too.
youre all so kind
I will be back.
love
peterpam wrote:Hi Gm, wow, what talent, but then we all knew you had both insight and an amazing way with words. You express yourself so, so well. Lovely to see you here, we have missed both your wisdom and your humour. Cleaver man indeed.
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